Reviews For Midnight Smoke
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Reviewer: Blissful Winter Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/09/2011 12:20 Title: Chapter 1

This is probably the best non-con Yassen/Alex fic I have ever read. As much as I love the whole idea of Alex being in love with Yassen, let's face it, that's not how Horowitz wrote him. You captured Yassen and Alex so perfectly that I was tearing up several times when I read this. The dialogue was perfect and your writing is so descriptive...I can't even express how incredible this is.

Reviewer: VintageQueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/2011 17:50 Title: Chapter 1

Very Good :) You did GREAT! You really portrayed the two characters and they weren't OOC at all :)...Keep on Writing!

Reviewer: Ariss Tenoh Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/12/2009 04:34 Title: Chapter 1

Excellent writing. I love the plot and its resolution.

Reviewer: Ruine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/07/2009 18:05 Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic and a pleasure, in many ways, to read. Granted, I did find the context slightly disturbing and chilling; at the same time, it was so exquisitely presented.

I do hope you'd gift us more with new works. There is just so few AR/YG fiction, and even less of the gems like this. Please keep writing! =D

Reviewer: lemke rita Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/05/2009 16:19 Title: Chapter 1

Wow. This story is so gritty and dark, but beneath the surface, there is so much going on. The Y/A relationship has so many facets to it, and you seem to have hit just about every one.

And just like most of your other stories, I don't know why things you write equally turn me on as well and disturb me. You just make it *real*.

Reviewer: Luci Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 15:58 Title: Chapter 1

Wow ..just, wow...I certainly didn't expect that ending...Great job! I think you could make an amazing sequel if you wanted to! Maybe where the didn't work on Alex and he remembers... I don't know. But you have great material here and I want to read more of your writing!

Reviewer: mylifemyterms Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/04/2009 02:05 Title: Chapter 1

sweet cant wait to read the rest of your work

Reviewer: blro Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/03/2009 05:54 Title: Chapter 1

Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Totally mind blowing. And so tantalising. It might have really happened... Oh that was so brillant. I look forward to reading other stories by you. And you guessed about Yassen and John before Snakehead? That's wonderful. It's one of my slight pet peeves. That after new books come out people usually don't upgrade their fics to either say 'this is now totally AU' or just change things that need to be changed to make for cannon background. Perhaps you could write a fic where Yassen is not dead after Snakehead? I'd love to read something like that. (it is a not-so-secret wish of mine that he'd turn up again. I mean, if Alex can survive a shot to the heart from a Scorpia assassin then surely he could be resurrected.) Thanks so much for a brillant fic.

Reviewer: Aisling Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/02/2009 15:04 Title: Chapter 1

As always, it partly horrified me and mostly turned me on ^^
Very well done. I hope they do meet again ;)

Reviewer: Anne Phoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/01/2009 02:07 Title: Chapter 1

Mmmmmmm, I love you :D

Author's Response: *snuggles back* Thanks again for the invite!

Reviewer: Ravenette2506 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2009 18:28 Title: Chapter 1

This is so well written, I really admire the way that you are able to combine an action fic with meaningful slash. This fic was the first Y/A i ever read and really made me move my ass and start writing my own stuff. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thanks so very much! I'm especially happy that you found it well-written, as I haven't managed to find a beta for it (this is a one-off from my home fandom...). And yes! Inspiring people to write is the greatest compliment imaginable! Best of luck, and I'm looking forward to reading the result! *hugs*

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