Date: 21/02/2010 05:09 Title: Chapter 1
That was great! A chilling start to their New Year. Thanks.
However wouldn't lye melt his eyes? Artistic licence I suppose. It wouldn't have the chill of the "Still pretty" comments without his eyes being in tact, I like the way you repeated that phrase - it worked well.
Date: 15/02/2010 18:40 Title: Chapter 1
It's good for such a short one-shot, but then again, who expected anything less than great from you?
I liked the use italics on he, and every for of he. That's about all I can think to write right now for this, but it was good.
Date: 12/02/2010 02:16 Title: Chapter 1
very yummy. i like the concept and the way you portrayed Alex. Poor thing, we do make him suffer so! Also. He is Yassen. He is. And no one will convince me otherwise :P
BTW... emailed the tech support pmsl but now i think i've fixed it...? When i change the skin around the review box shows up? :S