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Rated: Restricted - no under 16s
Summary: FeatureAlex just wants to have a normal life. But when danger turns up on his doorstep, he's not given any choice but to fight back.
Categories: Action/Adventure, Angst
Characters: Alan Blunt, Yassen Gregorovich, Tulip Jones, Original Male Character, Alex Rider, Wolf
Warnings: Torture, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 13 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 17226 • Views: 4526
[Report This] Published: 02/10/2008 Updated: 02/10/2008
Reviewer: Eternity Dreaming Signed
Date: 12/01/2011 Title: Chapter 13: Decisions

This story is extreamly insitful and put's things so clearly in perspective:

 "To Gregorovich, it would actually make a difference if Alex lived or die."

"To MI6, his death would merely be an inconvenience …"

Those two senteces sum up Alex's situation neatly, albeit in a harsh light. (the two chapters above the quote was also note worthy.) 

Personally I've always sort of thought Yassen was Alex's 'Get Free of Jail card' but he never really realised it, it's nice to see him wiggle his blindfold abit.

Anyway, the story was brilliant and I loved the twist at the end it was a brilliant cliffhanger. However it you ever want to write a sequel I'm all on board, waiting to see how Alex plans to free himself from his bonds. Just as soon as he figues which ones will set him free of cause! ;)



Author's Response: Just realised I never said thanks for your lovely comments. It means a lot to me that people are still reading this story, as it was first posted in 2005 :-)

Rated: Not suitable for young children
Summary: Alex is being reassigned because Mrs. Jones thinks he needs to be taught a lesson. Will he be able to train a class full of teenagers to become his successors, or will he manage to kill himself first?
Categories: Friendship, Angst, Action/Adventure
Characters: Tulip Jones, Original Female character, Original Male Character, Alex Rider, Derek Smithers
Warnings: Violence
Series: The Road Taken
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 7937 • Views: 776
[Report This] Published: 14/06/2009 Updated: 18/04/2010
Reviewer: Eternity Dreaming Signed
Date: 11/01/2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

AMAZING story but it's so sad and horifying what Alex went through and to have to train others to go and do what he did....well sometimes I wonder sometimes why he doesn't just walk away it's not like the M16 have anything to hold him.

Also I'd be interested to see the kids response if they saw the extent of his scars and heard his story. I wonde how long it would take for the novalty of being a spy would wear of then.

 Also random thought but it would be interesting if Yassen could have a word with Alex now considering he was always of the opinion that teenages should be woried about school and homework.

Better yet the strange conection between Yassen & Alex could help Alex. Sorry I'm sort of desperate for some silver lining right now and Alex has been through enough in my opinion.

However it's well overall just so sad, I can't imagine what Alex must feel like right now.

Rated: Not suitable for young children
Summary: Throw a pebble in a pond and you get ripples. Throw a boulder and you get waves. Throw in a life-changing secret, 24 teenagers and a fresh danger to the world, and you get Alex Rider's life. Sequel to Repercussions.
Categories: Mission, Action/Adventure, Friendship
Characters: Tom Harris, Original Male Character, Alex Rider, Jack Starbright
Warnings: AU
Series: The Third Law
Chapters: 2 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 2200 • Views: 228
[Report This] Published: 19/07/2009 Updated: 23/06/2010
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Date: 10/01/2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Um I just started reading this series but  it's like you just chopped a huge chunck out between the two stories.

When does Regina find out Alex is a spy and where does Ryan come into this? Sorry but I'm a tad confused right now.

Rated: Not suitable for young children
Summary: Alex froze as well. Then, he smelt it. Some part of the helicopter was on fire, and Wolf, Eagle and Fox were still inside, and unconscious. Story for Spy Fest 2009.
Categories: Action/Adventure, Friendship, *Fests & challenges* > Spy Fest 2009
Characters: Alex Rider, Fox (Ben Daniels), K Unit, Wolf, Yassen Gregorovich
Warnings: Character death, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 9 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 37149 • Views: 818
[Report This] Published: 14/08/2009 Updated: 02/11/2012
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Date: 11/01/2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: Abduction

Well written and I particully like the fable, I wonder how long it takes Wolf to catch on to the fact his the king?

Rated: General - all ages
Summary: Alex Rider, on an unexpected break from MI6, attempting to relax and receiving some intriguing mail concerning a certain assassin.
Categories: Friendship
Characters: Alex Rider
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 2116 • Views: 179
[Report This] Published: 26/11/2010 Updated: 27/11/2010
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Date: 07/04/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Edges of Understanding

Tottaly character and I love how you describe Alex break down and Jack's reaction. This would have fit perfectly into the Alex Rider series.

Rated: Not suitable for young children
Summary: Alex has finally managed to destroy SCORPIA and earn his freedom from MI6, but it leaves him with feelings he can't reconcile...
Categories: Hurt/Comfort
Characters: Alex Rider, Yassen Gregorovich
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 4161 • Views: 1282
[Report This] Published: 12/02/2011 Updated: 29/05/2011
Reviewer: Eternity Dreaming Signed
Date: 06/04/2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Same World

Brilliant I especially like the last part!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm hoping I'll be able to add more to this story soon.