Aged 16, things have gone very badly for Alex Rider. And, the way he sees it, there's only one way to set things right. NOT a death-fic... but it was a close run thing.Pretty good story. Unique and twisting. A love your portrayal of Alex! But I hope this isn't the end?! There just have to be other chapters!
Interesting continuation of the books. I've wondered about the events after Scorpia Rising. Personally I don't think that Alex can leave his past behind him. Maybe it's just that I don't want him to be normal again and be alone and kind of brocken and unable to leave his spy days and his skills behind him, but I think that he's changed too much. After experiencing what he did there is just no way that he could laugh about the same things like his innocent mates... I think that there'll always be a wide and insuperable gulf between him and the others.:D
Sorry abour the rambling, I just wanted to tell you how much I appriciate your story and agree with the events!
I absolutely love the strict schedule thing! :D Your writing style is quite good and well I've already menioned how much I like this story (no love story with Sabina... again the Alex can't be happy and normal thing... ;-) and a really interesting beginning!) I can't wait to read more, please update soon!