Reviews For Secrets
Reviewer: Scorpia710 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/2009 19:30 Title: Chapter 2
Date: 14/08/2009 19:30 Title: Chapter 2
Lol, it's nice to see Alex having fun with his friends. A few typos, might want to have another look over the chapter just to get rid of the annoying things, =)
Reviewer: Scorpia710 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/2009 19:26 Title: Chapter 1 Normal Day?
Author's Response: The line breaks were a fluke... I'm leaving them nice and simple! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 14/08/2009 19:26 Title: Chapter 1 Normal Day?
Interesting begining! I liked Alex's last line, he's cool, ^_^
The different line breaks were pretty...but really distracting! It might help to stick to one and go with that.
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: The line breaks were a fluke... I'm leaving them nice and simple! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Anne Phoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/05/2009 02:39 Title: Chapter 6
Date: 20/05/2009 02:39 Title: Chapter 6
Ooooh, I do like some unashamed violence - and the bad guys in the school scenario always makes me happy! Thanks for posting :).
Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!
Reviewer: darkmoon999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/2009 02:24 Title: Chapter 2
Date: 16/02/2009 02:24 Title: Chapter 2
The last chapter was a bit random, but I like it so far.
Author's Response: It kind is kind of a pre chapter thingy for the next chapter..... um yah