Date: 09/02/2011 02:09 Title: Chapter 1
This is a really great fic. I'll have to read the other fic that inspired it but I was wondering if there is a sequel or is the other fic the whole story?
Author's Response: No, this is not a sequel to that fic, it's just based on it. The story line in that one is different but it's based on the idea of General Sarov winning as well. Unfortunately there is no sequel since I kind of suck at writing series. There was initially a planned one but I'm not good at writing politics and conspiracies.
Date: 11/06/2010 03:37 Title: Chapter 1
Great fic -- I think this is your best writing yet. Well rounded, emotional, tells an interesting story but also lets the imagination fill in the blanks. I really like it. It works!
(but eeeek, dare I say there are some tense issues here - past to present switches)
Author's Response: Hi thank you, i love your stuff too... best writing yet? does that mean you've read my other stuff? *is confused* Also, yeah, i know... I kinda always do that when i write but i kind of don't know which tense I'm supposed to use when writing. I was hoping the beta-reader would help a bit with that but i think she noticed spelling mistakes more... anyway i'm currently looking for another beta-reader now so i can repost. Are you still busy now? i asked you before and you said you were.
Date: 10/06/2010 21:47 Title: Chapter 1
oh wow :) This was such a fabulous concept, executed so well.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :) like i said, i borrowed the idea from Silver Queen's story, just with more slash and a more hopeful is weirder ending.