Reviews For Alex's Funeral
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Reviewer: Alexrider101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/04/2012 11:00 Title: Chapter 1

I loved it and can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Anne Phoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/11/2011 10:08 Title: Chapter 1

Poor Alex. Poor Jack.
I like to the style of writing - it's fairly curt and to the point, fitting for the harsh emotions of this scene. I would recommend avoiding falling in the purple prose trap - it can be tempting with experimental writing, but I think you have it just right here.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. That it is the best way for a writer to expand right? Great constructive criticism is an invaluable tool.

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