Date: 10/03/2009 19:26 Title: Chapter 1
I've read it before, I know. But like in some books, the second time around lets you soak in more details. I realized how scary Alex seemed at his 8th kill, lol. I could actually see the blood splattering onto his pants--no more action films for me! XD Once again brilliant idea and I spotted no mistakes. Do you have a beta?
Author's Response: Yeah, Alex is one scary-ass sonuvabitch, isn't he? Yeah, I was actually cringing a bit when I wrote that. lol. Nyxelestia does conceptual betaing for me, but I do the grammar stuff. :D Thanks for reviewing again. ^_^