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Reviewer: Scorpia710 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/2009 19:30 Title: Chapter 2

Lol, it's nice to see Alex having fun with his friends. A few typos, might want to have another look over the chapter just to get rid of the annoying things, =)


Reviewer: Scorpia710 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/2009 19:26 Title: Chapter 1 Normal Day?

Interesting begining! I liked Alex's last line, he's cool, ^_^

The different line breaks were pretty...but really distracting! It might help to stick to one and go with that.

Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: The line breaks were a fluke... I'm leaving them nice and simple! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Anne Phoenix Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/05/2009 02:39 Title: Chapter 6

Ooooh, I do like some unashamed violence - and the bad guys in the school scenario always makes me happy! Thanks for posting :).

Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!

Reviewer: darkmoon999 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/02/2009 02:24 Title: Chapter 2

The last chapter was a bit random, but I like it so far.

Author's Response: It kind is kind of a pre chapter thingy for the next chapter..... um yah

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