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Rated: Not suitable for young children
Summary: Trouble finds Alex even on the most mundane of assignments...
Categories: Action/Adventure
Characters: Alex Rider, Yassen Gregorovich
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 2550 • Views: 455
[Report This] Published: 27/01/2010 Updated: 27/01/2010
Reviewer: Mogget Signed
Date: 27/01/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting! Thanks.
Please say there will be more to this.

Author's Response: Thank you! And probably :).

Rated: Restricted - no under 16s
Summary: Yassen Gregorovich is straddling his hips, staring down at him unsmiling, the frost-blue eyes hard enough to make Alex's heart thud...
Categories: *Fests & challenges* > Flash Rider, Slash > Alex/Yassen
Characters: Alex Rider, Yassen Gregorovich
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 1063 • Views: 653
[Report This] Published: 31/01/2010 Updated: 31/01/2010
Reviewer: Mogget Signed
Date: 01/02/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Out in the Open

That was really good. Thanks!
It perfectly shows you a glimpse of their lives - it is sad to see how Alex's life has developed in such a way that he thinks his affair will end with his lover hunting him down (granted he will be given notice - is that necessarily a good thing?) and killed.

Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughtful comment! In a way, to me it felt as if the danger element was sort of a protective pretense... easier than owing up to the fact that it might have become a real relationship...

Rated: Restricted - no under 16s
Summary: Sometimes, it's hard to keep track of time. Written for the flash_rider community’s sixth challenge prompt, "New Year".
Categories: Angst, *Fests & challenges* > Flash Rider
Characters: Alex Rider, Original Male Character
Warnings: Abuse, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 549 • Views: 186
[Report This] Published: 11/02/2010 Updated: 11/02/2010
Reviewer: Mogget Signed
Date: 21/02/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great! A chilling start to their New Year. Thanks.
However wouldn't lye melt his eyes? Artistic licence I suppose. It wouldn't have the chill of the "Still pretty" comments without his eyes being in tact, I like the way you repeated that phrase - it worked well.

Rated: Adults only
Summary: It’s new year’s eve, and Alex spills secrets. For the flash_rider community's New Year prompt.
Categories: *Fests & challenges* > Flash Rider, Slash > Alex/Yassen
Characters: Alex Rider, Yassen Gregorovich
Warnings: Dub-con, Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 771 • Views: 342
[Report This] Published: 13/02/2010 Updated: 21/02/2010
Reviewer: Mogget Signed
Date: 21/02/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well who wouldn't when faced with Yassen's powers of persuasion! Thanks for this.

Rated: Adults only
Summary: Alex finds himself dumped and drugged in a tunnel, left to drown... until an unexpected saviour shows up.
Categories: Slash > Alex/Yassen
Characters: Alex Rider, Yassen Gregorovich
Warnings: Sex
Series: Across the World
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 13692 • Views: 590
[Report This] Published: 03/03/2010 Updated: 03/03/2010
Reviewer: Mogget Signed
Date: 05/03/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was great fun! Their teasing was good - I really liked the moment Alex realised Yassen wouldn't be able to swimm either. Will there be more?

Author's Response: Hey, glad you like it! :) Yes! There'll be definitely more! In fact I already posted the first chapter of the sequel on ff.net and I'll post it here soon too!

Rated: Restricted - no under 16s
Summary: Two months after his discovery in "Drowning" (please read before!) that a certain Russian contract killer, he thought was dead indeed wasn't, Alex' luck to find trouble sends him stumbling into the man's arms again. Or maybe it's no coincidence? SLASH
Categories: Action/Adventure, Mission, Slash > Alex/Yassen
Characters: Alex Rider, Original Female character, Original Male Character, Yassen Gregorovich
Warnings: Abuse, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 2049 • Views: 298
[Report This] Published: 14/03/2010 Updated: 15/03/2010
Reviewer: Mogget Signed
Date: 18/03/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I did it, I admit it. After being good and waiting until you posted the first chapter here I couldn't wait and went straight to ff.net to read the second.

I like Alex's comments on not speaking Russian - I guess that could be a contributing factor to his following Yassen all the way into the brothel, though I don't think he thought the sticking out like a sore thumb aspect of going in. I’m glad Yassen now knows about Alex’s relationship with MI6 and will be interested to see if it changes how he interacts with him in future as it shows Alex has far more sense and brains than he had previously given him credit for, but also makes Alex more of a victim, more vulnerable. Will they meet again at dinner? I would not be shocked.

I look forward to their relationship developing and finding out what they are both up to mission and job wise.

Rated: Adults only
Summary: Alex is starting to understand ...
Categories: Slash > Alex/Yassen, Angst, Slash > Alex/OMC
Characters: Alex Rider, Original Male Character
Warnings: None
Series: Frisson
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 2951 • Views: 465
[Report This] Published: 29/04/2010 Updated: 29/04/2010
Reviewer: Mogget Signed
Date: 02/05/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lesson One

I like that Alex knows what he is looking for and seeking ways to go about it. Also that he did not find what he was looking for straight away, that Matt couldn't provide him with what he wanted and that the Handler has boundaries, they are all a way of waiting for Yassen. I liked the glimpses of Yassen's actions and look forward to lesson two.

Rated: Adults only
Summary: Yassen Gregorovich had beautiful hands – long, elegant and strong at the same time. They were also among the most terrifying things Alex had ever seen.
Categories: Action/Adventure, Angst, Slash , Hurt/Comfort, Slash > Alex/Yassen
Characters: Alex Rider, Yassen Gregorovich
Warnings: Sex, Torture
Series: None
Chapters: 1 [Table of Contents]
Completed: Yes • Words: 10819 • Views: 872
[Report This] Published: 13/06/2010 Updated: 13/06/2010
Reviewer: Mogget Signed
Date: 20/06/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that was great! Thanks.

Rated: Not suitable for young children
Summary: Alex receives a threatening letter from an old acquaintance that sets a chain of ominous events into motion...
Categories: Action/Adventure, Mission, Mystery
Characters: Alex Rider, Yassen Gregorovich
Warnings: Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 5 [Table of Contents]
Completed: No • Words: 14917 • Views: 1045
[Report This] Published: 12/08/2010 Updated: 15/12/2010
Reviewer: Mogget Signed
Date: 13/08/2010 Title: Chapter 3: An Unexpected Reunion

An interesting beginning, I look forward to Yassen's plan unfolding. Of course MI6 couldn't do anything without at least one ulterior motive, that would waste the point of doing anything at all! Thanks for this - I look forward to reading more.

Also regarding a mention of termites in chapter 2, I don't know if this is worth bringing to your attention or not, but the UK only has one termite colony (we are trying to get rid of it, so far unsuccessfully) which is in Devon.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, MI6 has an ulterior motive for everything. Can't even send for a cup of tea without it being a part of some vast international government conspiracy. As far as the termites, I knew (as an American writer) I'd blunder something at some point in this story...or did I? Maybe those Brixton termites are just another thread in this tangled web of mystery. Who knows? The answers will all be revealed in the end...!