Reviewer: enenre Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2011 14:58 Title: Chapter 1

It was an awesome idea. I just have one gripe about it; setting the scene took a bit too long.  This fic was classified as crack/humour and I'd expected humour (which was certainly delivered!), but just saying it would have been a lot funnier if the fic was shorter :)

Great job!

Reviewer: RmfD Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/08/2010 17:56 Title: Chapter 1

Oh, Ian. You have just as much a mouth on you as your nephew. And presumably your brother.
...sometimes it seems more a wonder that any Rider men survive as long as they do if they insist on talking like that to their captors. XD;

Reviewer: LttlBlcKitty Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/04/2010 18:08 Title: Chapter 1

wonderful i can imagine the reaction!!

Reviewer: Scorpia710 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/08/2009 18:48 Title: Chapter 1

I'm actually chuckling out loud at Ian's wit and nerve, and my cat is staring at me, ^_^

Very enjoyable, and a very nice way to turn a dangerous situation upside down--unless Yassen shot Ian after that of course...I'd rather not think that!

Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it...and that your cat is entertained haha. I like to think that Yassen didn't shoot Ian, only kicked him in the head or something :P. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: hpstrangelove Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/06/2009 05:33 Title: Chapter 1

I really love this - I love anything with Yassen, but I truly enjoyed the way this one played out.

Author's Response: Thanks! I honestly had no idea where I was going with this one until I started writing it--at that point it really wrote itself. Thanks for reviewing!